• [ ] Add a go-to market for our Pitch deck.
• A lot of filler words “basically","aaaa","things we still need to fix", "so" ... best to avoid that. Go with confidence and sharper
• [ ] Include your ask amount in your slide and what it would help you achieve.

More notes

• Don't do introduction. It was too long. Go directly to the slides
• I wonder if the customer is "community managers" or more "Dao leaders" or "marketing leads" or even more "marketing and community leads"
• too long on problem. It felt like you were repeating a lot. I got lost and started switching off.
• the pain point: you said after explaining "so these are some painpoints we're looking to fix" I already know that. You just shared that. Dont repeat
• competition: twitter, discord, telegram are not competitors. Having those logos is confusing
• the idea of token gating and permission management best in a separate slide. It was explained too much. Could be sharper
• Our solution: what do you mean it's integrated with user wallets? How does that improve security?
• Target Market: need numbers with the $ sign
• don't share about the interviews. That should be a given.
• Size of market: where are these numbers coming from. What market is that? It's not clear what you're saying is your market. "The [what] market"
• competitors analysis: not very clear what the competitive advantage is
• biz model: fees but who pays? Individuals? Organisation?
• pricing: a bit too detailed

Feedback from ChrisB

1. web3 usability problem - try to tell a short story of the slide and not read all the text on the slide The pain point - repeats the problems from the previous slide. This slide could focus on the dao member user journey and identify the potential drop off points stackles slide - dashboard, wallet-based access permissions is the USP - need to stress this Our Solutions - this slide has a mix of both technical implementations and restated generic solutions like "avoiding fraud" it should just show the different tech solutions Target market - need currency signifier Size of market - need to justify why last market is obtainable Buinesss model - need to spend more time here July 13, 2023 6:15 PM (GMT+1)